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e-Magine was a really interesting event! seeing some entries were fun to observe and learn from. I thought Drew McCall and Brooke Biasella did a really good job with speaking! Kierstyn and I enjoyed watching the ghost video imitation things the most. It was a very interesting night and it was pretty cool because i got to experience it with the people i don't usually hangout with!

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