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http://fox4kc.com/2017/12/08/independence-officer-shot-in-the-line-of-duty-will-return-home-after-months-at-nebraska-rehabilitation-center/

In this article, the writer does a good job at breaking up the different things that  contribute to the story. This is helpful when looking at specific details, but not always. I think it is a short story with not as much information as they could've had, but they mentioned every detail which was good.

One thing that I would change is the format, while its good that there breaking it up, it looks bad because there isn't enough content to make a paragraph and it just looks like 10 broken up sentences instead of connecting the information.

 They kept it short and sweet by the information they gave and the wording of things. I will take away the wording from this and try to use words that would get to the point quicker and still tell a story. This one was a little difficult to read because of the constant break in information so it would've been helpful to connect some of it.

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