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Evan
good things: Great J and L cuts with good timing
constructive: adjust audio levels during voice over so it has more of a transition

Nick
good things: good video timing and equal amounts of J and L cuts!
constructive: adjust levels on voice overs because they were too quiet.

Allison
good things: good wording on voice overs and good broll
constructive: extend audio a little more so it doesn't seem as chopped up.

Court: 
good things: good story line and good job getting enough information from one guy!
constructive: adjust Nat noise a little bit lower.

Dema
good things: Great broll and interviews! 
constructive: your voice overs seem a bit long! maybe shorten them to something more of a description.

Rosie 
good things: good job telling the story well! 
constructive: I would consider finding some more still shots so the camera isn't moving. 

Kiki
good things: good interviews!
constructive: I think there's a lot of similar voice overs starting with el attrache

Cathrine
good things: great use of J and L cuts!
constructive: maybe try to liven up the voice overs to seem a little happier!

Alex
good things: B roll was used well!
constructive: voice overs seemed to be too closely put together. there wasn't enough time to break up the story.

Mitch 
good things: good amounts of Broll!
constructive: I think the audio levels were a little off balanced!

Nicole 
good things: good voice overs! clear and good story builders!
constructive: shaky camera for some shots.

Drew 
good things: good job using facts throughout your story! 
constructive: adjust audio levels and Nat noise!

Emily
good things: GREAT EVERYTHING!!!!
constructive: I don't have any because I thought you did well.

Conlin
good things: great information and placement!
constructive: The camera is a lil shaky. I would suggest maybe livening up your voice overs!

Cyle
good things: good way to end the story!
constructive: adjust audio levels in some parts to make sure it's even

Ben
good things: good interview
constructive: voice over should be reconstructed 

Abby 
good things: great interviews with good content. 
constructive: Check iris ring when filming!!

amy 
good things: good J and L cuts! and interviews were good!
constructive: Try to make voice overs sound a little more flowy

Alyssa 
good things: good voice overs! 
constructive: check the timing on some of the shots so it doesn't cut in and out! 

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