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I like my video because the story line makes sense and has a problem and solution and all that. I like how it has a dog rather than a human because you can still tell what the dog is thinking and what he is trying to do. I like how the dog has a lot of detail to him and ow he wasn't just squares and rectangles. On the other hand, i don't like how there isn't much going on. I don't like how the sounds don't matches well as they could've. I think if they had more sound effects to go with it, then it would be better. I tired to get the best sound that matched possible, but there wasn't very many that went with the dog theme. I also don't like how its so short. I think the message gets across, but i also think it could have more.

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